davebgimp.com: Aliens, Roswell & Deathbed Confessions
Clutch
· 2 years ago
Something to ponder is the bad editing in the first sentence.
daveb
· 2 years ago
Que?
Clutch
· 2 years ago
"I just read this article about the deathbed affidavit by Walter Haut, who was the army public relations liaison at the Roswell Air Force base in 1947 when the so-called “Roswell Incident“. "
...when the so-called "Roswell Incident"..." When it what? It needs a verb. Like...when the so-called "Roswell incident exploded, or occurred, or turned into diahreah.
daveb
· 2 years ago
Doh. You're right. I missed that in the final edit. Fixed.
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...when the so-called "Roswell Incident"..." When it what? It needs a verb. Like...when the so-called "Roswell incident exploded, or occurred, or turned into diahreah.